2010-03-26 18:59:42

I agree with Redplaugue you managed some sweet parts in there and i never knew that about Mckoy

2010-02-22 19:28:18

this is an awesome series

2010-02-13 14:31:01

Wow very funny! Liked how you made the whole thing great job!
5* + rec

2009-08-11 16:05:33

Wow, great writing. The speech bubbles are sometimes a little too quick for me to read. I know, I know, I need to take a speed reading class so I can read more than a paragraph per hour. But, your grammar seems to be pretty good. You use "to" and "too" in the right places! Hard to find on this site.

Also, sometimes I got distracted by the characters mouths moving while someone else was talking.

This video was hilarious though. Your characterizations are captivating. I can't wait to figure out what's going on! Really looking forward to the next installment!
5*

2009-08-10 23:01:35

Ok, that was funny!

2009-08-10 12:16:53

very sentimental!

2009-08-08 17:22:42

Really enjoyed this one too.Great story,and ome parts that made me laugh in there too.Nicely done.
5*

2009-08-08 00:23:24

awesome!!! cant wait for #3

2009-08-07 22:12:05

A great story and a great part this Blockbuster series

2009-08-07 22:01:10

LOL...some great moments in there.  An involved, intriguing, and sometimes light-hearted story.  Nicely done.   I look forward to the next installment.  :-)  My only small criticism would be some of the speech bubbles weren't up long enough to read.  I found myself rewinding and pausing to catch what I missed.  Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed it.