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Return to Tomorrow's Yesterday

By jeanniethegrinch
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Published on: 22 Feb 2009

Kirk and Spock encounter the 'new' Enterprise

tachyondecay 2009-02-22 01:20:31

Bravo!  Your dialogue is wicked funny; you managed to break the fourth wall without turning it into a full-fledged spoof.  I saw it as more of a commentary on Star Trek's constant reinvention of itself for each successive generation.

You could improve your placement of speech bubbles.  Sometimes they're awkwardly placed to the point of being haphazard.  I know from working on my current animation that it's no picnic adding speech bubbles to characters in motion, so I won't nitpick that aspect.  Other than this, I thought the animation was well crafted.

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