good vs evil 4

2010-03-15 18:25:58

These videos are particuarly good, but really the only problems I found were (as NPP has said) grammar and (as etourist has said) the multiple speech bubbles.  Very well done, or as the French say, Super! (Terrific!)

2010-03-08 22:17:43

I watched all four of these and the series definitely improved as you got further into it.

I liked all the different heads you put on the stick figures in the earlier episodes to create some interesting matches. The overall story wasn't too bad and having Guile get captured did make the war a little more interesting than a straight good vs evil battle.

That monster at the end seemed to grow really fast but it made for a good final battle. Over all I say, Well Done.

I'd just be a little careful with having multiple speech bubbles on the same scene (particularly in part 3). It's good that you numbered the order to read them but it's still a little confusing seeing a whole bunch of speech balloons come up at once.

2010-03-06 21:07:08

Good, but you might want to fix the hp problem in one of those fights.

2010-03-06 17:54:19

It was alright

2010-03-06 15:02:52

i had problems with the hp bar