The Farmer Jay (2/2)

2011-09-19 02:18:31

dmac6806, thank you for your comment and questions. sorry not having posted for a long time, well

all the he people in the village, even Jane's parents think Jane is crazy because she stays all day long in the church. Jane loves baby Jesus, there's no other place she'd rather be. Only Joy knows Jane's not crazy... Joy loves Jane. Thus he takes Jane and Jesus to his farm and hide them from the people of the village upset with the kidnapping of baby Jesus from the manger. Nine months later, she has her baby boy... and ever since Jane and Joy have never been happier in their lives.
Thank you all for your comments, greeting.

2011-04-13 13:06:08

Again--beautiful music and very elegant transitions from one scene to the next, especially the part where Mr. Dick comes to visit Jay at the farm.

As someone who is interested in the craft of writing, I'm very interested in what motivates characters--what makes them tick, you might say. I guess I would have liked a deeper exploration of Jane's character. What is her motivation for watching over the church's Baby Jesus figure? What finally persuaded her to give it back? What did Mr. Dick mean when he told Jay that he and Jane were "safe?" Safe from what, from whom? Is Baby Jesus a metaphor? If so, for what?

So many unanswered questions. Oh well--I suppose there IS something to be said for simply letting a story unfold, and allowing the viewer to draw his or her own conclusions about the characters and their motivations. At any rate, very nice work. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

Best Regards,
DMac

2011-04-12 07:50:44

Gayy u r makin fun of jessus!!!!

2011-04-09 08:51:11

i don't believe in jesus but this is a great story with a great ending ! :D

2011-04-08 15:03:55

Aww :)

2011-04-05 09:12:25

I love this story very much.I feel poor to Jane.I don't know she is crazy.(lol) Anyway the plot of the story is so nice.

2011-04-03 05:17:02

Crazy cool indeed...!!!

2011-04-02 23:44:38

i love part one and 2

2011-04-01 19:09:22

outstanding

2011-04-01 18:20:40

Very, very nicely done.  A unique story told in your unique style.  I honestly had no idea where you were going with this and I was pleasantly surprised.  Aenor...you're crazy cool.  :-)