Star Trek Recovery -- Promises -- Episode One

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MattyG Productions - animator on GoAnimate
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Published on: 27 Feb 2011

Star Trek Recovery takes place 50 years after the destruction of the Romulan Home World,the back ground and characters and uniforms are framiliar but different, the time line has been changed,Episode One Promises is just an Introduction

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ϟ Aи∂гøเḋ вøøṃ ϟ
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ϟ Aи∂гøเḋ вøøṃ ϟ says:

2011-06-23 17:38:14

So....amazing...

guitar chris
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guitar chris says:

2011-06-17 15:21:54

Very cool great start to your series

LörÐ §ðr¢êr¥
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LörÐ §ðr¢êr¥ says:

2011-06-16 11:03:15

AMAZING CREW

Aidan The Artist
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Aidan The Artist says:

2011-04-27 07:05:56

nice
u iz a star trek nerd

Nicolas
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Nicolas says:

2011-03-16 00:15:43

Really cool new series! Great work. I like that you present the characters and take time to give background info about them.

Maybe as you get to know GoAnimate more you can have other users help you with the voice overs. Having real voices definitely makes animations that much better. :o)

Gangster Fart
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Gangster Fart says:

2011-03-16 00:10:41

1. Did you get some of those clips from a video game? Neat.
2. Seems like some clips are too long.
3. Seems like a real show/movie.
4. One of your zooms were strange, because when the camera was zoomed into the 2 characters, one of them was waving his hands.

etourist
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etourist says:

2011-03-15 22:43:16

Visually this is as good as many of the best Star Trek series creators on GoAnimate.  I don't know how many of those sets/backgrounds you put together yourself but whilst you're adding credits for other people's work don't forget to credit yourself for set creation too :-)

The only real problem is the exposition which is quite lengthy in some scenes without much of a visual break to distract the viewer. For example, when you were introducing the crew you cut to scenes of each crew member at work - which is a good way of keeping a lot of dialogue by one character interesting. You probably needed to employ this technique a lot more in a few other scenes - the old adage... "don't tell, show"  is worth keeping in mind - as much as you can.

MattyG Productions
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MattyG Productions says:

2011-03-13 22:09:00

thanks dmac,ihear what your saying,i got more back ground stuff to spew out in the next few pisodes,next one iam experimenting with some action and battle scene,but iam greatful for the positive feedback so far,and iam gonna try and keep em down to like six minutes or so instead of twelve lol.

dmac6806
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dmac6806 says:

2011-03-13 10:56:18

Not much to add beyond what Ro said regarding the sets and props. A little heavy on the exposition. I guess that's to be expected in Episode 1 of any series. Still, one of the great things about doing a series like this is that it allows you time to let the characters and the story unfold gradually, rather than giving it all to the viewer in one "lump sum," so to speak.

All in all, though--very nicely done. I'm looking forward to seeing the further adventures of the USS Recovery.

MattyG Productions
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MattyG Productions says:

2011-03-13 00:37:08

thanks alot for your kind words t mira, and rotv no offense taken, totally don't want anyone feeling like iam taking credit for there work,i will check the tag on them,and sorry solar baby for not giving you koodos in the film next one for sure. and thanks delta

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