Star Trek: The Orphan - Part Four

2011-02-11 19:37:04

Wow! You displayed an almost perfect representation of the true nature of the Star Trek characters! Bone's crack and humor was superlative! Spock's jumping-to-the-rescue-at-the-last-minute-to-save-Kirk's-sorry-butt was also flawlessly reconstructed! And, yes, Captain Kirk really does make stupid decisions without actually thinking the situation through. It NEVER ends well!!!!!!!!! Ah, Kirk. Even on GoAnimate, you have no acumen!

2010-04-10 05:13:07

This would be a great TOS episode I hope there will be a sequel

2010-02-19 02:19:30

Awww milo got a new home.  Sweet.  Great story and animating.   Good soundtrack too

2010-02-17 18:18:12

This series overall featured strong animation work. You really took the time to make sure that the characters and other objects moved in a realistic way. I also like the fact that you used different fonts for the speech bubbles. That made it really easy to discern who was doing the talking, especially when the speaker was not on-screen.

The background music was outstanding, and your use of props was extremely creative. I especially liked the pipes that fell down from the ceiling when the Enterprise was hit by the Gorn phasers, and the sparks that were emanating from the ends of the pipes. The boulders were a bit strange, though.

For me, however, it's all about the story. There were times when the plot seemed to veer wildly from a straightforward "Star Trek" story to out-and-out satire, and I had to take some points off for that. Still, a very strong, workmanlike effort. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

2010-02-13 15:16:58

Wow awesome animation! I liked how you made everything so sad and awesome! I liked how the characters develop to find Milo! Amazing animation! Liked how you executed the credits! 11:00 minutes! That was 11 minutes! I can't believe it! Time went so quick! So the saying is true " Time Fly's When You're Having Fun"

5* + rec

2010-02-09 09:00:01

Excellent!  Wow, that didn't feel like 11 minutes.  It flew by because it was absolutely entertaining, funny, and well crafted.  So many bits in this cracked me up.  I thoroughly enjoyed that.  And I loved your closing credit sequence.  Very clever and well put together.  5 stars & a Rec.

2010-02-07 08:42:11

That was superb, Megora!
What a great series! You are a very talented writer- you manage to blend humor in very well to a superb story.  
5*+

2010-02-06 22:11:11

Extremely impressive!  5/5 & a recommend!

2010-02-06 06:06:21

cool episode

2010-02-05 21:15:42

That was totally awesome!  Thank you for your four part Star Trek series.  An infinite vote from me.  I look forward to your next video or series.  Great ending credits as well.  Thanks.